Hello Shiqi, I love the creative photo that you used! On your set of images you did a great job of not moving the frame of the image and just the focus. The subject of the first two to me look like a mushroom maybe or a tree. In the first image my eyes were drawn down with the grain then to the little spur that was coming out. In the next image the focus is the grass or moss that the item is sitting on. And the framing of the last image with the only flower being in the lower center really made it stand out. While you did a fantastic job on the set of images at first glance I had a hard time telling which one was the focused foreground and which was the focused background. To help with this I would suggest instead of focusing on the moss focus on the ground in the far back to make more of a dramatic effect. In the last photo I appreciate how my eye was instantly drawn towards the flower then afterwards it followed the shapes of the leaves. Overall i think you did a wonderful job.
Hello Shiqi,
回复删除I love the creative photo that you used! On your set of images you did a great job of not moving the frame of the image and just the focus. The subject of the first two to me look like a mushroom maybe or a tree. In the first image my eyes were drawn down with the grain then to the little spur that was coming out. In the next image the focus is the grass or moss that the item is sitting on. And the framing of the last image with the only flower being in the lower center really made it stand out. While you did a fantastic job on the set of images at first glance I had a hard time telling which one was the focused foreground and which was the focused background. To help with this I would suggest instead of focusing on the moss focus on the ground in the far back to make more of a dramatic effect. In the last photo I appreciate how my eye was instantly drawn towards the flower then afterwards it followed the shapes of the leaves. Overall i think you did a wonderful job.
Thank you Natalie!
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